tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2400818017241610817.post1416301139600660255..comments2014-01-22T18:53:13.133-08:00Comments on The 3 Imagination Learners: A Salmon Graveyard - by MakaylaLeannahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06025187887866513342noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2400818017241610817.post-82722143233094854822013-10-28T19:23:45.965-07:002013-10-28T19:23:45.965-07:00Tyson says: I love your poem! I really liked how y...Tyson says: I love your poem! I really liked how you "Sharoned" the fish with your friend! <br />Paige says: That's really cool I hope to go see that some day. I hope to see you soon :)<br />Auntie Paula says: What a descriptive poem Makayla! I love going down to the river to watch the salmon... it makes me think of sharks swimming around! <br />Paulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841426149698603698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2400818017241610817.post-69480340518635738482013-10-24T10:12:38.962-07:002013-10-24T10:12:38.962-07:00hi Makayla!
The fish really are awesome… at spawni...hi Makayla!<br />The fish really are awesome… at spawning season.<br />I also enjoy the mud, seagull cries, the Eagles watching and observing the progress of the fish as they swim upstream.<br />I'm not usually fond of the smell, and a sense of sadness that these fish will soon be dead.<br />You're right about " all the memories lost"<br />great description<br />love… Poppa Mpoppa mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16485637859207498718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2400818017241610817.post-58291791292587257872013-10-23T22:29:50.543-07:002013-10-23T22:29:50.543-07:00Your descriptions and poems brought me right back ...Your descriptions and poems brought me right back there to the smelly fish! Don't forget that through all that smelly craziness, a new generation of life is being created! It truly is an amazing process!Uncle Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11802813845385277586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2400818017241610817.post-87802653639597810702013-10-23T18:22:58.761-07:002013-10-23T18:22:58.761-07:00You made the experience of watching the fish strug...You made the experience of watching the fish struggle, into a fun game! I think that's a nice way to see them finally make it home...ready to leave behind the next generation of fish! Great poem, Makayla!DonnaKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08246333327725671826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2400818017241610817.post-14064620483939801582013-10-21T14:18:41.668-07:002013-10-21T14:18:41.668-07:00Your poem vividly captures the sights, smells, and...Your poem vividly captures the sights, smells, and feelings of both joy and sadness that come with each spawning season. And your description of the game played with your friends reflects the excitement that comes with the salmon's challenge to get up the river.<br />Good writing, Makayla!...and glad you were having such fun!jomadillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06265138503747741970noreply@blogger.com